Monday 31 March 2014

Chapter 2: The Doda Withdrawal - Part II

Doda has tainted the city - filling its veins with his filth for years, he has made it an addict.
It is time the poison was flushed out, and the city went into rehab. It must be cleansed, of the drugs and of Doda. He has thrown down the gauntlet.

I am Salar, and I have taken up the challenge!



The parking lot was deserted, just like it had been the night Salar had busted up Adeel Doda’s drug deal, earning the drug lord’s eternal hatred in the process. Salar’s memory of that night was still hazy, but he could well remember the gunshots, particularly the one that had caught him in the shoulder. He remembered the flash of moonlight on his daggers and the flow of blood that followed. Tonight, there would be no drugs, yet blood would surely flow and come dawn, Doda would either be behind bars or he would be dead!

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The cars pulled up outside the parking lot, five of them, and fourteen men clambered out. Each of them was clad in black, and each had a weapon of choice - steel knuckles, sticks, crowbars, daggers, and baseball bats, yet no guns. Doda had expressly forbidden them - he wanted Salar alive, broken and beaten to a pulp, yet alive. He watched from one of the cars as his men spread around the lot in pairs, searching for the masked vigilante. Tonight, Salar would lie at his feet in a pool of blood and come dawn, he would be dead!

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The night had grown colder, and Salar’s shoulder wound tickled. He shrugged it off, weighing the Kali sticks in his hands, adjusting his grip. He had counted the men as they entered the parking lot, taking mental notes of their weapons, their height, and their mass. Perched atop the closed restaurant, he couldn’t help but feel a touch disappointed - fourteen men. They were too few. This was too easy! Salar grinned, and jumped off the rooftop.

The first pair never saw him coming. Salar took them down with simultaneous blows to the back of their heads, silently and efficiently, and then dispossessed them of their weapons. He moved onto the next, and then the third, knocking them out quickly, balancing the odds stacked against him. It wasn’t until he spotted the fourth pair of Doda’s men that Salar encountered his first real problem of the night.

Salar assessed his options, watching the two men as he crouched in the shadow of a large SUV. These men were sharper, smarter - it would be difficult to catch them unawares, impossible to prevent them from calling out. Boring, thought Salar, and then made his decision. He placed the Kali sticks on the ground, then launched himself off the fender, and vaulted over the vehicle, drawing his swords mid-air and descending upon the wide-eyed thugs, even as they shrieked for help.

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Adeel Doda stopped dead in his tracks when he heard the terrified shriek, He is HERE! He had been pacing next to his car, restless with anticipation, his mind raging with a single, all consuming desire when - ‘Found the bastard!’ He moved towards the sounds of weapon striking weapon, flanked by two of his henchmen, smug with thoughts of his inevitable victory until he came upon Salar, engaged with six of his men at once.

Doda’s smile faltered then, as he observed the atrocious skill that the vigilante displayed in battle. Gone were all traces of the smugness he had displayed but a moment ago, as he watched Salar dispose of his men with astonishing speed and ridiculous ease. Doda signalled his two bodyguards to join the fray as well, and watched with increasing horror as they too fell, succumbing to the flurry of Salar’s swords.

Sketch n' Design: Tehreem Naeem

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The night grew quiet again, and then broke into morning as the first rays of dawn appeared over Ittehad City. Salar sheathed his swords, surveying the eight bodies that lay strewn around him. He looked up to find Doda rooted where he stood, too scared to attack and too shocked to run away. “Go now. Leave this city, and never return. You are banished, under pain of death!”

Doda twitched, hands clenched into fists, eyes full of hate, trying to burn holes into Salar merely with their gaze. “Banished?” he screamed at last. “This is my fucking city!” He ran towards Salar with a bellow, and swung his arms mightily, only to catch empty air with the steel that encased his knuckles. “Fight me!” he raged, as Salar evaded his blows. “Fight me, you arrogant little pissant. No one banishes me from my own fucking city!”

Salar stopped him with a single punch, hard into the sternum, robbing him of his breath and his voice. He then grabbed Doda by the collar, slammed him into the side of the SUV, and punched him twice more, this time in the right kidney. “I gave you the chance to run. Now, you will rot in prison, and you will watch as this city cleanses itself of your filth. What is so fucking funny?” asked Salar, as Doda began laughing.

“Look at you,” replied Doda with a smirk. “You don’t even know the city you are trying to save. Send me to jail. Go ahead. I will be out in a few hours, and I’ll rule over Ittehad again after I have killed you!”

“Perhaps you are right,” said Salar grimly, “Maybe I don’t know this city anymore. But you, you will never corrupt it again.”

Salar stepped back, then rammed the heel of his boot into Doda’s right kneecap, and Doda screamed, a bloodcurdling shriek that drowned the sound of bone shattering into a hundred fragments. Salar held him up against the SUV, then broke his left arm at the elbow and Doda howled again, writhing in agony. Salar then punched his right side, breaking the two lower ribs, and walked away, as Doda crumpled into a heap on the ground, whimpering hoarsely.

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The tension in the front room of Zaray’s farmhouse was almost palpable. Zaray paced its length, as she had done through the night, and let out another frustrated huff. She shot an ugly look towards Süleyman, who had neither moved from his vigil in the armchair, nor said a word since Salar had left to confront Doda. He could have saved her, and himself, all this stress had he but allowed her to go with Salar.

Zaray hadn’t slept since before Maryam and Salar had shown up almost twenty-four hours ago, followed by the dead body and the gruesome message on her surveillance screen. They had spent the morning with their eyes glued to the screen, until it had become clear that the police had no intention of moving the body. Süleyman had arrived in the afternoon, and had then arranged for the corpse to be brought to the farmhouse.

They had examined every inch of it, but the only thing of interest was the note they found in the shirt’s front pocket: ‘Tonight - where the drug deal went wrong for both of us.’ The rest of the evening, they had debated how to deal with the situation, and Zaray had pleaded to go with, but in the end, Salar had gone out into the night alone.

Maryam had smoked her way through half a dozen cigarettes after he left, before Zaray had to snatch the pack away from her. She had since worried herself to sleep, and lay curled up on the couch, dozing fitfully and murmuring in her sleep. She awoke now, to the sound of a car coming up the driveway, as Süleyman finally stirred, sitting up straighter and more alert.

“How did it go?” she asked, as soon as Salar had stepped in through the front door. “Are you hurt? What about Doda?”

“Not a scratch,” said Salar with an easy smile, collapsing into the armchair next to Süleyman. “As for Doda, he has been permanently withdrawn. There might be a problem though. I had to take extreme measures.”

Süleyman leant forward as Salar unsheathed his swords and placed them on the coffee table. He ran a finger across one blade, and held it up, blood glistening in the light. “How many were there?” he asked quietly. “Tell me what happened.”

Salar explained the events of the night - how he had been forced to use his swords, and how he had dealt with Doda. Zaray glared at Salar throughout the story, huffing with exasperation, and swore loudly when Salar described taking on eight men alone.

“Well, we will deal with it - me and Zaray. You, Salar, you have quite another problem to take care of now,” said Süleyman. “An old friend of ours has followed you to Ittehad, and that does not bode well for the city.”

“Who is he?” asked Zaray and Maryam together, just as Salar said, “Which friend are you talking about?”

She,” corrected Süleyman, his eyes fixed on Salar. “She is someone who will lay to waste everything that we have been trying to build here.”

“Are you absolutely certain that it is her, and she is definitely here?” asked Salar.

“Without a doubt, son. It is her. Marijana has come to Ittehad.”